First edit of my music video

This is my first edit for my music video, although I like some parts of it such as the beginning I feel that a lot could be improved for it to be the best it can be.  From putting it all together I have found that a lot of my footage is too long and would bore the audience at times therefore I need to film more and cut on the beat so that there is more going on. I understand that it is a slow song however there is still a beat which I can cut to so I would like to maintain the slowness of it as well as cutting to the beat to improve the large amounts of the same footage and add some depth to it.

Refining final advert

I have chose this particular image to use for my final advert, I really like the formal qualities (tones, colours, shapes, shadows positioning etc) mainly because of the positioning of the image as the artist  it quite central which makes her the main focal point and shows she is the most important part of the magazine with is then backed by the writing with her name being the biggest. I also like the colours, i purposely chose to put earth like colours on the model so it looks well with the forest and other surroundings, the colours are very light and kind of painting like, the photo reminds me of paintings and a lot of pictorialist work which is a movement from the 18th century, where there was debate that photography is a form of art not just a click of a button it is creative not just documentation etc. There is a lot of improves i need to make to this version of my advert, i would like to make the Jill Zimmerman, souls to fuse to stand out a lot more and look more seperate as well as making the urls a lot smaller so the audience isnt so fixed on them. I would also like to get rid of the out now in the corner as i dont feel it looks very good